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Watching the sky with amaze
when the sun is showing peaceful
hills while magic dark streaming
water waving with wonder
As the colors are talking to you
saying dance with joy
live life to the end
the world is a field
filled with crazy beauty
sunlight going down
sounds are unspoken
waiting for what tomorrow brings
clouds will be missed till day time
Ignacio--beautiful poem. The words and images makes such powerful and clear messages for the reader. One of my favorite lines is in the last stanza--"the world is a field/filled with crazy beauty"
ReplyDeleteWell done. Just curious--did you like writing the poem? Will you write more? You seem to have a natural talent for it.
Oh, I posted this poem as our facebook blog post of the week. If you haven't already "liked" the page, you should so you can check it out and share it.
Here's the link:
https://www.facebook.com/pages/SRJC-English-100/274657112549868?ref=hl
//lm